Art History 164
Romanesque Architecture

Winter 2000

Term Paper

TERM PAPER

Length 7-10 pages, typed, double-spaced.

One typed copy due in class Tuesday, March 14--no later! Always retain a copy for yourself.

Feel free to consult with me, preferably in office hours (listed on the syllabus).

Please follow all instructions carefully, especially "general instructions" below. As with the exercise, read the material on writing in the Reader carefully and consult Ellsworth frequently. Papers with too many easily avoidable errors will result in a NP for the class; if the paper is otherwise satisfactory, a student may correct the errors and acquire course credit through a Credit by Petition--a hassle for both of us and cost for the student. Thus, please write with care the first time.

A. SET TOPICS. Select one of the following options:

1. Choose a theme, issue, or specific feature (e.g. clerestory, pier, or vault design) in Romanesque architecture and discuss it in relation to several well-chosen examples. See me first with your ideas or your hesitations, if you wish.

2. Analyzing several thoughtfully chosen Romanesque buildings in concrete terms at length, write an essay based on Southern's description of southern and northern literary style found on page 23 of The Making of the Middle Ages. The buildings of the Exercise (first paper) may not be used.

You need not limit yourself to examples discussed in class, but browse through the books on reserve and in the stacks to find interesting examples.

3. By choosing a thought-provoking section from Southern, Stalley, or other texts, write an essay on Romanesque architecture. Analyze several Romanesque buildings in concrete terms at some length. For example, you might select the following sentence from Walter Horn's article (p. 18): "In timber it [this concept of skeletal division] flows as a logical construction method . . . In masonry it ushered in a conflict between style and matter such as could be handled only on a very sophisticated level of civilization . . ." The buildings of the Exercise (first paper) may not be used.

4a. Write a critical* review of 3-4 (or more if you like) of the videos listed on the syllabus. One must be Light on the Stones. If you select Three English Cathedrals, you need discuss only the section on Norwich, since the other two concern Gothic, not Romanesque. You may select more than four videos, but be sure you write with some depth; don't just make a rapid list. Remember, you are writing an essay, not a list of 3-4 reviews.

4b. A critical* review of Ken Follett's Pillars of the Earth might also be possible. See me.

*"Critical" does not mean discuss only negatively, but evaluate thoughtfully the strengths and weaknesses of each, being reflective of the assumptions and methods used. The dictionary defines critical as "characterized by careful and exact evaluation and judgment."

5. Romanesque architecture has been characterized as both a regional and an international style. Using several well-chosen examples (4-6), examine whether it is more regional than international and what issues have an impact on internationalism.

6. Is Cistercian architecture a Romanesque variant, or to what extent could it be so considered? Use Fontenay in Burgundy as one example in your discussion. You may wish to consult Kubach; Conant, chapter 11; Otto von Simson, The Gothic Cathedral, pp. 39-50 (not on reserve); Braunfels; Brooke; Jean Bony, French Gothic Architecture of the 12th and 13th Centuries, pp. 21, 312-13, 512-13; Oursel, Bourgogne romane; Dimier, L'art cistercien--use the last two for illustration if you don't read French. Other books are on reserve and in the stacks.

B. INDIVIDUAL TOPICS. Must be discussed with instructor during office hours or via e-mail by Tuesday, February 29. By March 2 a brief (2-paragraph) synopsis of topic with specialized bibliography is due. If insufficiently developed, the student may be required to write on a set topic.

1. Write an essay discussing the significant aspects of the Romanesque architecture of a building, or section of a building such as the nave, that we are not studying in class. (A few exceptions may be allowed. See me.) Good papers will include a visual analysis of the elements of the architecture, a characterization of its qualities, and especially a solid discussion of the place of the selected building within its architectural context (the specific [local or regional] as well as the general context of Romanesque architecture). Discuss what makes the building interesting. Each of these aspects should be carefully considered and specifically discussed in some detail. See instructions for the exercise.

The building you choose in discussion with me must be reasonably well illustrated--at least with some interior views and probably a plan; exterior views and sections provide valuable help. You may concentrate entirely on one part of the building, e.g., the nave. See me in the early stages of your work to discuss problems and to avoid booby traps (archaic inaccuracies or fallacies) in the material.

2. Any topic on Romanesque architecture.

C. STUDIO PROJECT. Designed for arts or "arch" majors; previously demonstrated skill in writing required. See separate page of instructions; ask me for it.

GENERAL INSTRUCTIONS FOR ALL TOPICS

Remember that you are writing an essay. This requirement means that your presentation and organization of the material must be carefully thought out and include a suitable (and interesting!) introduction and conclusion, which introduce or follow the ideas you bring out in your paper. (Suggestion: write the body of the paper first, the conclusion next to last, and the introduction last, but do not simply state your conclusions in your introduction.) You should consider visiting a writing assistant with your assignment, a draft, and some illustrations. Finally, you (or a tutor) will, of course, carefully PROOFREAD your paper in hard copy (not on the computer) to correct typographical, spelling, and punctuation errors which would otherwise distract my attention from your carefully wrought discussion. Warning: Spell-check is useful, but it does not correct all errors. (Poorly proofread papers will be reflected in student evaluations.)

Consult especially the books on reserve and their bibliographies as well as the slide library. Particularly useful are Conant, Barral i Altet, Durliat, Busch, Fillitz, Kubach and Künstler. Also helpful are the richly illustrated books of the Zodiaque La Nuit des Temps series, several of which are on reserve, e.g. Bourgogne romane (Oursel), Normandie romane (Musset), Lombardie romane (Chierci), Catalogne romane (Juhyent); others are in the stacks. See the supplementary bibliography handed out in class.

Some background reading will be necessary for the writing of this paper but it is not meant to be a complete research paper. Instead use your eyes, texts, and notes--and think. This is an essay, a product of your thinking. Consider the topic in light of the course lectures and reading. Some additional reading will be necessary to broaden and deepen your sophistication of treatment, but do not expect to find abundant material on your topic. Include footnotes where necessary. If you need to quote, be sure to use quotation marks and cite your reference. However, beware of relying upon other authors--the field is fraught with misinformation, and your own opinions are more interesting to me. At the end, supply a BIBLIOGRAPHY of the texts used, arranged alphabetically by author, last name first. Please include a few xeroxed ILLUSTRATIONS to illustrate the salient points of your discussion; write the SOURCE of each illustration on it. If you use a slide, place the call number on the cover page of your paper, and alert me that you are using slides from the Slide Library to illustrate your paper; have them set aside for me.

COVER PAGE: Before handing in your paper, attach a COVER PAGE which contains your name, title of paper, indication of topic chosen, date actually handed in, and the following items in a LIST checked off after you have completed them: pages numbered, bibliography in proper form, foot(end)notes as relevant, illustrations as appropriate (including any drawn from course texts), sources of illustrations noted on them in proper bibliographic form, paper carefully proofread and free of errors.

NOTE: Students who fail to supply illustrations, their sources, a bibliography, and footnotes as appropriate
will have the evaluation of their papers emphatically lowered.